tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2091394862702289333.post6615052709056269308..comments2011-01-25T08:30:05.872-08:00Comments on Red Light! Green Light!: For Three Hours Tonight I Sat With My Dog Before Having to Put Him DownRed Light! Green Light!http://www.blogger.com/profile/13994217336172081977noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2091394862702289333.post-65612648801552809932008-03-25T10:34:00.000-07:002008-03-25T10:34:00.000-07:00sentimentality breaks this poem. the moment at whi...sentimentality breaks this poem. the moment at which the narrator directly addresses suffering seems necessary, but unprovoked. there should be an intolerance that is eased by the statement, but the poem doesn't set up that friction. too focused on effect upon the narrator than the affectual possibilities in the poem as presented to the reader.iffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18358259732154725767noreply@blogger.com